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Muscle Man

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How I do sometimes feel Empty
PostSubject: How I do sometimes feel   How I do sometimes feel EmptyThu May 21, 2009 8:45 pm

this is a very beautiful poem, so please
Enjoy.





Oh look at how she listens
She says nothing of what she thinks
She just goes stumbling
through her memories
Staring out on to Grey Street

She thinks, “Hey,
How did I come to this?
I dream myself a thousand
times around the world,
But I can’t get out of this place”

There’s an emptiness inside her
And she’d do anything to fill it in
But all the colors mix together
to grey

And it breaks her heart
How she wishes it was different
She prays to God most every night
And though she swears it doesn’t listen
There’s still a hope in her it might

She says, “I pray
But they fall on deaf ears,
Am I supposed to take it on myself?
To get out of this place”

There’s
loneliness inside her
And she’d do
anything to fill it in

And though it’s red blood
bleeding from her now
It feels like cold blue ice in her heart
When all the colors mix
together - to grey
And it breaks her heart

There’s a stranger speaks outside her door
Says take what you can from your dreams
Make them as real as anything
It’d take the work out of the courage

But she says, “Please
There’s a crazy man that’s creeping outside my door,
I live on the corner of Grey Street,
and the end of the world”

There’s an
emptiness inside her
And she’d do anything to fill it in
And though it’s red blood
bleeding from her now
It’s more like cold blue ice in her heart
She feels like kicking out all the windows
And setting fire to this life
She could change everything about her
using colors bold and bright,
But all the colors mix together
To grey
And it breaks her heart

It breaks her heart
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PostSubject: Re: How I do sometimes feel   How I do sometimes feel EmptyTue May 26, 2009 11:01 pm

Humph. Title it, Joey-Dragon. By her 2-3 posts, she doesn't know where she belongs.

I know nothing of you all, but i've been around.
Stand tall an be firm.

Just....be equal too.
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PostSubject: Re: How I do sometimes feel   How I do sometimes feel EmptyWed May 27, 2009 4:48 pm

Well, WhyDoWeAll, I'm beginning to think that you should check out my other poems.
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